Know any professional political speechwriters?

[robr]

I don't want to get into specifics, but here is the scoop in general. I can write a decent enough speech, but in this particular situation I will be up against 5 or 6 others that in all likelihood can write a decent speech as well. One of them is also an incredible ad-lib orator and one of the best local speakers I've ever heard, another is a favorite as he previously held the position (but on the other hand, he lost the election last year which is a strong message from the public). We each have 5 minutes to talk (with press and public attending) and at the end, 9 people will immediately vote to determine who the best person is to fill a vacant seat. (Normally this is a publicly elected position but someone has vacated with a year left in the term).

So I need a speech that not only explains why I am the right person for the job (because everyone else will also have decent enough credentials), but I need a hook that will differentiate me from the pack, show that I can bring something that doesn't already exist in the other members, be memorable and perhaps even contain a bit of levity. So I'm thinking perhaps some professional help may be in order.

Anybody ever traveled this road before? There are plenty of speechwriters if you google, but I can't really find a way to determine who is really good and who's middle of the road. Budget is of course a factor. It's a non paid public position, so while I'm willing to invest to better my chances, I have to be conservative with costs. In one year I'd be out anyway and will actually hit the pavement to get reelected.

 

[docjohn]

Seems like it would be most helpful for you to go last.....short term memory being what it is....also gives you a chance to refine your talking points....just remember to tell people what you have done rather than promise the moon.

 

[Hrant]

Rob, the decision of getting "good" help really depends on a speech writer that would know your local community dynamics as well as you and not just how to better phrase what you want to say. Quick pointers, don't pointedly criticize the others since you are already acknowledging they are good candidates as well; if they have flagrant flaws or promises not delivered I am sure the community knows or the others will mention it. Highlight what is different in your candidacy and why this is a good thing for the constituents to evaluate and vote for - as in "new" strengths that you bring to the position. As John said, don't promise - noting variables/circumstances always change and you need the flexibility to evaluate what is in the best interest of the ... - offer how you will address the issues/concerns. But if there is a very specific issue that constituents want to hear about, address it as best as you can with simple short sentences - even if the issue is complex. Make it more of a dialogue rather than reading from a sheet .......

Having said this, perhaps you can seek the "advice" of a local reporter. Good luck.

 

[robr]

Well, things went better than expected, but the previous 3x councilor won as was reported would happen in the local papers. 8 people submitted applications, 5 showed up to speak, needed 6 of 10 votes, round 1 was 5-2-2-1 with me getting 2 (surprise!!) and round 2 went 6-2-2.
Perhaps I'll make a real run of it for next year's election.

 

[FF Drifter]

And now at least you have that experience and can adjust your strategy next year accordingly!

 

[docjohn]

sadly local politics have nothing to do with the issues........its a popularity/graft/influence game......once you get in you end up slidding down a slippery slope....