C&C? Compulsive Copulation? lol ... JK yes please, give me your opinions as that's what I look for! I have been taking it *A BIT* more serious this "photography" thing this the last 3-4 months, to the point that I am getting for Christmas a much powerful camera that my mundane Sony, dude, if you see some of my pics from 3 years ago .. you would laugh so hard!
Oscar
Here is some general CC. I usually take CC positively and has helped me tremendously. I've had some critiques which really made me change things I've done! This is by no means meant to be negative in any fashion. I'll just work with set #11....
General comment: Lose the borders. Borders are generally not an acceptable practice anymore. It's too distracting. Also, watch out for excessive use of the vignetting filter. It should be used sparingly.
Pic #1: Not sure I understand the composition, it's also your subject matter is not in focus. This would have been a throw-away IMO.
Pic #2: Not bad, if you are really picky, you could have cloned out the reflection on the passenger door. Later on when you upgrade camera/lens, consider a circular polarizer filter which could eliminate the reflection in the windshield.
Pic #3, cool shot considering you didn't have much to work with as far as background, etc. goes. You did a nice job with the composition with what you had to work with.
Pics 6-10: I like the composition of all of these shots, but you need to shoot at a lower shutter speed. Some of them in particular are shot at too high of a shutter speed which doesn't capture what you are aiming for (which is a rolling shot). The last few aren't bad, but you need more wheel spin which will give them a more dynamic impact.
Pic #11: Looks good, I would have cloned out the power line.
Pic #12: I would have had the owner close the trunk.
Pic #13: This is something that's very important, watch out for background items that look like they are "growing" out of the car. This is one basic thing you need to keep in mind when you are shooting. I would have tried to position the car away from the pole "growing" out of the car, or clone it out.
Pic #14: Again, the truck open could have been corrected.
Pic #15: Stop sign "growing" out of the car
Pic #16: Take the shot after the girl moves.
That's my overall CC, I also have to again emphasize to lose the vignetting and borders. I think you're using them to give the shot a more "fancy" touch?